Wow this was amazin'
Much better then the other song I reviewed of yours. I don't mean that in a bad way, but it's the truth. This was truly awesome beause this game is awesome 7 mario & etc. The only thing I would say is that this was repetitve, but that's it. Great job!!!
Thanks! I have a few other Star Fox's too :3
I love the remix
What program did you use. Fl Studio?
Yes indeed
Wow, the night feels many things
This song, compared to your other ones, is one of the best in my opinion. It started out slow, but listenin' to your songs I knew somethin' would pop up. The synth at 1:36 made the song way better & gave it a retro/dark feel. Listenin' to this, I could tell you put a lot of work into this, what with all the great synths and all. If you said the trancey synth was the one at 1:36 then I think it had more of a retro feel then trance, but no point marked off for that. The trance part I thin you're talkin; about is at 2:30, but if I'm wrong then oops. The reason I mark a point off is for repetitiveness, but that's it. Great song you got here & keep up the great work, although I don't think I have to put that cuz I know you will ;) !!! 9/10 & 5/5
Thanks a ton! I really appreciate it and I'm really glad you like it!!!
Yes trancedrive came in at 1:36 it's a really nice synthesiser!
Thanks again!
Omega
Definitely better
The clap was less sharp, the piano quality is good, everythin' is equalized, great string, the synth was really good at 1:36 when you added that to the song, & the intro & outro were both perfect. The synth is what really made the song better in my opinion. This song would definitely be great with a rap to this. Again, this was better then the WIP of course & I hope to see more of this. Kepp it up & goin'!!! 5/5 & 10/10
Thank you a lot man, and yeh i like the synth I added at 1:36 too which is why I added it lol :)
This was pretty good
Well, I liked your samples, the synths, of course your long intro as usual, mostly cuz I'm use to that, & the drums too. The samples at the beginnin' had some bad feedback. It's not just how you made the song, but Newgrounds does have some weird feedback problems with the songs. It was also a little repetitive, but at 1:24, the song became better. Overall, the feedback was kinda bad, but the song was still good.
I'm not hearing the feedback your talking about?? maybe you're referring to the sub I used?
Glad you liked it anyways and thanks for reviewing it!
Omega
I feel a 80's vibe from this
Alright, so I didn;t really like the intro only cuz it seemed a little useless & annoyin'. The song also got a little repetitive. Those are the only 2 problems I have with this song. At 1st I started gettin' a little bored then I heard the wonderful keyboard at 0:51 seconds & that changed everythin'. I started hearin' that 80's oldskool vibe in my ears & it was wonderful. That keyboard is what made this song better. There was also definitely enough effects with it which made it better. Weird cuz I never thought a mix of the 80's & dubstep could go together so that was a good mix-up. I loved how the keyboard wobbled, well wobble bass I guess you could say, but it sounds like a combo (heh, keyble bass). Overall, good song & combo 8/10 & 4/5
The keyboard is Harmless with wobble just really detuned. :D
The wobble is a custom, I never thought of 80's when I was making this. I was thinking classical dance though, so they're about the same.
Hmmm, could be better
The beginnin' convinced me this was gonna be an awesome song at first. The tempo was great & everythin'. But then it just kept repeatin' & that's when it got annoyin'. Also readin' your author comment on the bottom, yeah the steel drum could've been outta the pic. Maybe since this is kinda short, a gunshot for a race to start. The drums could've been a little better too. Now, I did like the outro & intro parts, overall, make this less repetitive & might I add, BASS BASS BASS
I guess I'll have to update it than.. yeah I try to make it close to what it was orignally at. D:
You know what...
I saw the authors comments & before listenin' to the song whole, I checked out the other 2 versions & I agree, this is probably the best of the 3. Also one the 1st version, I agree with the person who reviewed it, I like the chords & stories lolz. I especially liked the gates, panning, the guitar was a great touch, drums, I mean everything was in tune. And I noticed you said you used Poizone. Which program did you use it in?? I mean I think you can use it in anything really, but I'm just wonderin'. Anyways, I think you must've put alot into this song cuz the emotion you packed in this song is yours & Kirsten's love combined into this one perfect song of harmony & heaven. This is one of those songs where if I made this, I wouldn't be able to top & since you used the power of love to make this song, it's hard to top. Again, excellent job & I hope the next song you make is as touching as this one. 10/10 & 5/5
I really appreciate your kind review! I'm probably going to go back and clean up some of the MIDI notes. I kind of rushed this and didn't make it perfect before tossing it up. The original song and this remake were made in FL Studio. Stay tuned for more music!
Again, that aquatic feel 5.00 / 5.00 (+ 5.00)
That water feel in this song is like your other one which I really enjoyed, but this song is more compressed so it feels more underwaterish, which is still good. When the bells kicked in I really enjoyed the song even more. When stuff kept coming & coming in, just made the song better & better. The strings were also very nice too. I also like how in mostly all your songs you put the FX at the beginnin' cuz it's like a signature a rapper use in the beginnin' of his or her song except this is a small FX. The only reason I give this a 9 is because it did get a little repetitve. None the less, I really enjoyed this song.
Thanks a lot! I like creating that underwater/gritty/dark feeling!
Yeah it was pretty much looped twice lol, mostly for a rapper too use though! I'll try changing it up next time!
Thanks again!
Omg, can you say Evil Clowns lolz
I can totally picture this in an evil clown game or somethin'. Anyways, this song was pretty dark & awesome. Everythin' in tune, dark voices, nice kick, & great synths. Now, as I wuz listenin', I said to myself this would be great with a wobble bass. I don't know if you've ever made dubstep, but you should at least add a wobble bass if you could & that would add more to the song & it would make this song just awesomer. I know this is industrial, but a wobble bass just seems like the perfect thing to add to make this song perfect. Also, I know this is industrial, but it did get just a tad repetitive. The voices are almost like wobble bass, but not quite. Some of the voices are more of that YaYaYa bass, not the actual wobble. Overall, I really enjoyed this song. 4/5 & 8/10
Hi, thanks for the kind words. Never listened to dubstep before, I'll have to check it out. If you can PM me with any suggestions on where to start, that'd be great. :-)
I am Xavier, but you can call me Stavier. I dable in the making of music production. You should checkout my songs cuz you just should, k??
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